As part of the DIE FOR ME blog tour, Kristin from Bookworming in the 21st Century asked me to write a guest post about creating mythology. Here it is!
I don’t know if I’m the best person to ask about creating mythology, because I didn’t do it in a very organized way.
With my revenants, I started with the idea of an undead being that died over and over again, coming back to life at his original death age. In my mind, a revenant was something between a god and a zombie. And after that I just had to ask myself all of the why, how and when questions and kind of wait for the rationale to come to me.
Little by little, as I wrote, clear rules started to crawl out of the primal sludge. And as each rule emerged, it gradually clarified what the revenants were in my mind. For example, at some point, I thought, “Well, if there are good revenants, there have to be evil ones too.” And then I had to decide what they were and how they functioned.
It all came down to two things, I guess: equilibrium and truth.
In DIE FOR ME, when explaining the difference between the revenants and their enemies, Ambrose tells Kate, “The universe likes an equilibrium.” Mythology also likes an equilibrium: between humans and immortals. Between good and evil. Between fate and chance. If a mythology is too lop-sided it doesn’t seem real to me. So if you follow the equilibrium rule and write half of your mythology, by the default of equilibrium you’ve got the other half practically figured out for you.
And truth. No matter how wacko or out-of-this world a mythology is on the surface, if you read it and it sounds true, than the myth-maker has done her job. Every time I wrote a supernatural passage, I asked myself if it sounded true. And if it didn’t, I worked on it until it did. Or scrapped it altogether.
I think truth comes from a story’s connection with the real world and with other stories. If you can find links with history or with quirky but true aspects of the real world, you will have a firmer, more honest foundation to build from.
Beyond that is the scary (for me) step of making an actual hard-and-fast decision for your mythology that has nothing to do with equilibrium OR truth. Because sometimes you just have to decide that something is the way it is because YOU SAY SO. (I sound like my mom.)
For example, I got to this point in the book where I realized that I had to make my revenants impervious to bullets. The whole mythology needed it, even though there was no rational reason for it. So I just came out and said it in my text.
“ We use guns when we’ re expected to,” answered Charlotte, “ if we’ re fighting alongside humans in the cases I mentioned . . . bodyguarding and the like. But bullets don’ t kill revenants.”
My editor came back and said, “Why? I don’t get why bullets don’t kill revenants.”
So I put on my walking shoes and walked about five miles going over and over in my mind why revenants couldn’t be killed by bullets. And the only thing I came up with was “because my mythology needs it to be like that.”
At that moment I had this kind of revelation. I thought of all of the writers before me who had created the rules for vampires, werewolves, zombies and the like, and they ALL used the no-bullets rule. (Unless it was a special kind of hard- to-get bullet.) But I realized that they all must have gotten to the point as well where they said, “It just has to be this way or my story won’t work.” Which was kind of cool.
I went back to my desk and added on to Charlotte’s sentence:
“ But bullets don’ t kill revenants” —she paused—“ or others like us.”
And with those last four words I linked my revenants to already-established monsters, making my decision legitimate by historical usage.
Mythmaking is hard-going. It makes you kind of obsessed, because even on your off-time, your brain is trying to figure out how things work. But when it all comes together, man does it feel great.
2 Comments to Creating Mythology
by Kristina Ebert - On June 1, 2011
That was a great post.
I do love it when authors create their own mythology or even change around mythology to fit their own needs. Look at vampires there are so many different versions from Bram Stoker to Twilight to Ilona Andrew’s Magic Bites vampires. All completely different but each their own creation.
I wonder if people will start making their own version of Revenants. I love these new mythological creates, it is nice to have something original.
by ana - On June 3, 2011
We were in the need of something new, I’ve been reding YA for so long now that the whole vamps and werewolves and feries were getting too old. Authors like you give us something more to not stop enjoy reading!!!
Great book I can’t wait for Die For Me 2…
Like we say in Puerto Rico for good luck “Mucha Magia, Mucha Musa” o and “Mierda”